WALT persuade people to not build a factory on our courts.I deliberately believe that having a factory on our courts is depressing.
Having a factory is bad because our school will be small. If parents see that it's small they might not they might not send their child to ST Patrick's school. If there is not many children, our school might shut down. There might not be a catholic school in Panmure.
If we have a factory there will be no courts. If there is no courts we can't do exercise and if we don't do exercise we will not be fit and healthy and if we are not fit and healthy were not respecting God. We won't
be able to play sports and we can't play continuous tag. It would sad to us, sad to God and sad to the courts.
It is a bad idea to put a factory here because will be concentrating on the noise. They would not learn much. If they don't learn they won't know how to read. You can't get a job if you can't read. You could die because you don't have money to buy things. The courts help us to live.
If there is a factory on our school our school will be small, our courts will be gone forever and the noise from the factory will distract us and we be dumb. Would you want all this to happen?
1 comments:
Hello, I really like the ambitious vocabulary you put in your thesis. But I really like your reason 1 its the best reason in your story.I hope they don't put a factory on our courts.
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